Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Hatched

Once remained inside a cocoon
When i was a larva they fed me with a spoon
Then became the pupa,the fun filled teenage
But they never closed me in a golden cage

Remaining facet,being a butterfly
Scared,Nervous,Yet ready to fly
Time to transpire,outta the comfort zone
Now its time to make it on your own

Staring at a turning point
Scaring if it'd disappoint
Trying keenly to observe
Whats hidden behind that curve

All those who went ahead left some footprints
Here i am coming,following their hints
Got a day left,to stay in this warm nest
To scribble trash and waste more time
Realizing its not about words that rhyme:D

6 comments:

--xh-- said...

nice.. simple lines that radiate emotions... me likes this...

GingerTea said...

all the best dear >:D<

Unknown said...

Really cool poem! All the best for the coming days! :) you probably won't have time to mull over things like you have now!

Praveen said...

gr8...tht just bares your mind for everyone to see...
loved the choice of words..and the comparison with a butterfly's life stages...nice work

and all the best,,:)

kartoos said...

@ xh:- thank you:-)
@ meenu:- thanks >:D<
@ rockus:- thank you. i hope so.
@ praveen- thanks:D

Anonymous said...

Great work dear..
and All the best....